Memories of War
Memories of WarWhile bombs were falling,sirens wailing,people running, screaming,in distant parts of the country,Pete, Mike and Matthewmy best friends, and Iwere playing in the woods.We slid down...
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crisp, clean, lean story-telling.word choice, line structure, stanza format...all work together seamlessly to promote "The Tale" without drawing attention to themselves.very good work.Ben.in other words
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I enjoyed the child's perspective on large events; it brought adult perspectives into question for me. Lovely narrative, very well written "A poem...begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a...
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ah, davie ... see ... I could convince myself you wrote this just for me a memory from long ago unfolded so clearly here as to allow the reader to see, hear and feel it all. a poignant and powerful...
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Thank you Ben, and Valoe, and Beth - much appreciated. It all happened a long time ago, but I hope it has some relevance to today.Davie
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